Hi Keoni, this is really great writing and well done with your sentence punctation as well. You have really worked on adding in detail for the reader. Next time just make sure you copy the text from the document you are working and then paste it in as a blog post, this will make it easier for people to read.
Hi Keoni, This was a very moving and thoughtful piece of writing. It really makes me think of what they were having to deal with at that time. Well done. Sharron
Hi Keoni, this is really great writing and well done with your sentence punctation as well. You have really worked on adding in detail for the reader. Next time just make sure you copy the text from the document you are working and then paste it in as a blog post, this will make it easier for people to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Keoni, This was a very moving and thoughtful piece of writing. It really makes me think of what they were having to deal with at that time. Well done. Sharron
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